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Post by clarib on Sept 8, 2011 18:25:13 GMT
Amanda Smith busied herself as she hurried around the tack store,trying to get everything ready.She put thijgs in the right place,she ummed and erred whether to put stuff somewhere else.
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Post by onedream on Sept 24, 2011 18:57:30 GMT
Teagan smiled as she walked into the tack store, holding her new credit card. She walked, in, going right to the halters and lead ropes, picking out two nice leather ones, one a large pony size, the other a horse size. She also got three breakaway halters, a bright blue, bright green, and a patterned one.
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Post by clarib on Sept 24, 2011 19:00:55 GMT
The lady smiled at her.She walked over."You need any help,miss?"She asked sweetly.
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 1, 2011 19:56:28 GMT
Tori walked into the store quietly and walked over to the saddle's and bridels she was looking at the most expensive show jumping saddle and bridle that matched each other both dark drown leather and soft and sqidgey knee rool and seat and the bridle was stiched and amazing and they were the most expensive, i decided i was going to buy it because my saddle was old and tatted an i'd given it to my mum and my bridle so i didn't have anything to ride with so i decided i would buy there and i also picked up some black over reach boots and some tail raps, platting bands and a new brown leather bridle with a dark brown lead rope. and i went to the desk with the over reach boots the leather bridle and lead rope and the plattin bands and the tail raps and waited for the shop owner to buy the stuff andthe saddle and bridle
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Post by clarib on Oct 2, 2011 8:15:13 GMT
(USE FULL STOPS)
The lady smiled."I'll just run this through."
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 2, 2011 8:48:22 GMT
(whatever, who are you talking to??)
I waited inpatiently for the shop owner with all the stuff i wanted to buy
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Post by clarib on Oct 2, 2011 8:56:01 GMT
(YOU!Its impossible to read,and your being plain rude and ignorant.If you dont use full stops or gramnmar in one more post in any thread,I will give you a warning.)
Amanda laughed to herself quietly.
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 2, 2011 8:59:22 GMT
(why does it matter if i don;t use full stops i've done that in hundreds of other posts and you havn't complained but if it makes you feel so happy i'll do it)
"Hi, i'd like these things and the saddle and bridle over there i said pointing at it" smiling.
(happy now)
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Post by clarib on Oct 2, 2011 9:04:34 GMT
(For gods sake.I didnt picjk up on it before,because i tried to ignore it.But now its at too higher level.You cant read it,it doesnt make sense,you dont know what goes where)
"I know."amanda retorted.
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 2, 2011 9:06:36 GMT
(fine if it makes you so happy i'll do it)
"Thank you" I said walking over to where the saddle and bridle were cearfully picking the bridle up and then the saddle
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Post by clarib on Oct 2, 2011 9:09:57 GMT
"Thats $5324 please."The lady eyed her up.
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 2, 2011 20:02:04 GMT
I was fine with the money, my dad had just won a race at the grand nationals so i was fine with money he gave a quortor to me, "Ok" I said pulling the credit card out of my pocket that i on;y used for horsey things "here we go" I said smiling
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Post by clarib on Oct 4, 2011 7:10:49 GMT
The lady ran the card through the till.Her face fell,"Oh!"She looked at the girl."Im really sorry."
(USE FULL STOPS!!!!!!!!!)
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 4, 2011 19:07:15 GMT
(sorry sorry, got so carried away)
"Umm.... yes, i do have a back up card if that one doesn't work, don't worry"
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Post by clarib on Oct 4, 2011 19:09:49 GMT
"yeah.It's invalid.It means you've wasted $3,000,000 that you cant transfer."
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 4, 2011 19:12:58 GMT
"Actually i can because, sorry woops" She said looking at the card it was her old one that didn't work "So sorry that's my old one" I said taking it from her and handing her the one that worked
(this one does work)
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Post by clarib on Oct 4, 2011 19:19:58 GMT
(yeah.REMEMBER THE ONE LITTLE FULL STOP!!)#
She ran it through."You've gone over by a couple of hundred bucks."
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 4, 2011 19:23:47 GMT
(sorry, if i promise will you take the warning off)
(clarib, it's my charrie she's rich so she has enough)
the sun shone
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Post by clarib on Oct 4, 2011 19:32:04 GMT
(no,not enoguh on that card,you can pay it back,it doesnt matter if you go over)
The lady handed over the card."Done!"
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 4, 2011 19:34:30 GMT
(clarib, it's a bit stupid to give a warning to puncitation, it's nothing bad, i just realished)
"Thank you very much" I said smiling.
(you forgot your full stop)
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Post by clarib on Oct 4, 2011 19:37:00 GMT
(I had exclamation mark.It's got a full stop in it!)
"Bye"She smiled."Thank you"
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 4, 2011 19:39:09 GMT
(but, you put full stops after the speach mark, wrong english. and it doesn't count)
"Thank you very much, would you mind just helping me carry these things out to my car, there just outside" I said smiling
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Post by clarib on Oct 4, 2011 19:40:52 GMT
(Oh my god,ask your mum,you dont put an exclamation and full stop.If you put an exclamatipon mark,it counts as a full stop,ask ur mum!!)
"No,I dont mind.I'll help."
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 4, 2011 19:42:17 GMT
(whatever, can't be bothered)
"Thank you ever, so much, what will you take for me??" I said smiling
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Post by clarib on Oct 4, 2011 19:43:12 GMT
"I'll take your saddle and bridle."
(I took of your warning)
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 4, 2011 19:47:35 GMT
(thanks so much, i'll try to do my best)
"Ok thank you very much" I said handing it to her and then picking up bag and the bag of horsey stuff "Follow me" I said walking to the shop door
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Post by clarib on Oct 4, 2011 19:49:03 GMT
(Full stop.I'll put it back on if you forget.)
She grabbed the stuff and followed her round to the car lot.
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 4, 2011 19:59:23 GMT
(sorry)
I opened the door and then held it open for the lady and then walked round the corner and into the parking lot went to my lambagini and flashed open the boot and then slipped the stuff i was carring in the boot and waited for the lady.
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Post by clarib on Oct 4, 2011 20:00:52 GMT
(ok,dont just put one at the end,you need to use commas and full stops in the actual whole writing.)
The lady fol,owed her.
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Post by rubyrocks on Oct 4, 2011 20:03:03 GMT
(ok cool, i'll try to remember)
"Rigth here please" I said smiling and waiting for her to place it on the stand for a saddle built into my car.
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